Friday, May 23, 2008

Lost Paradise

Don't show me the promised land,

No,
Don't talk to me about paradise.

You will show me the blue sky,
The green grass, the yellow sun, the purple carnations,
the moon-lit sky,
But,
You will not be there by my side.

Leave it to the painter, the poet, the dramatist, the musician;

No,
Don't talk to me about paradise.

Don't show me the promised land,
If you cannot walk the distance with me.

9 Comments:

Blogger Aruna said...

My Adaa Adoos....I adore you!

Come home, let's talk...don't you feel lighter now? May be, May be, you don't have few promises to keep as well??? It's all part of life...

And my sweet bro, for heaven's sake, get some sleep...

12:03 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Simply loved it. Im awe-stuck to find Amulya's gang of poetic friends!!

12:24 AM  
Blogger baddimaga said...

Thanky you. Who be Amulya??
Yeveran? You are upto some serious globetrotting :). Do you have a photo blog?

12:53 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

this is a good one.
very deep.

4:21 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Amazing....and very nicely put...
loved this one as could go through only one ......

7:34 AM  
Blogger baddimaga said...

thanks Himanshu :)
Do I know you?

8:54 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

A touching poem!

8:33 PM  
Blogger baddimaga said...

thank you, Veribivore :)

8:45 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

will u accept just anyone to walk d distance wid u...ok the one who showed u d promised land-just dat one!

3:18 PM  

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